Lead #1: Time -- yesterday. Where -- Butte County Court. Who -- a local couple was in a traffic accident in March. They sued. Yesterday, the two were awarded $150,000 in damages. They had suffered injuries. That's what the damages were for.
(Edited: A local couple received $150,000 in damages yesterday because of a car accident in which they were injured in March).
Lead #2: What -- a snowstorm. So what? Well, another is expected. Forecasters say it will hit the Sierras today. It's part of a series of snowstorms.
Forty-one families were removed from a housing facility located on 204 Union Ave. as a fire destroyed the building today. Three firefighters were injured during the evacuation according to the police.
(Edited: Three firefighters were injured today while rescuing 41 families from a burning building located on 204 Union Ave according to the police.)
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Lead #1 - need to say where they got the money...otherwise, it just sounds like maybe somebody felt bad for them and gave it to them.
#2 - Good
#3 - Good, except for a bit of missing punctuation ("...Union Ave., according to police.")
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