The magazine project was definitely a fun project, because I’m interested in joining the magazine industry. It really helped me understand what will be expected of me and how much work I will need to put into each piece of writing.
I think that the project turned out fairly well. I was happy with my broadcast script and the recording of my broadcast feature. I enjoyed writing it because I enjoy the game, and I had a lot of fun finding a concise way to explain and criticize the game for what it is.
The project took more time than I expected, but came together fairly well. I enjoy playing the game, so I think that I took the time to really appreciate its worth and really look into the critical points of the game.
I think that I enjoyed searching for the info box/graphic. Because the game is so intricate, it was hard to find a short video that would encompass most or all of the parts of the puzzle game. I honestly found it a challenge for the graphic, because of how much can be said about the game, and the amount that really needs to be shown in order to understand it.
Next time I would probably review the entire game pack instead of focusing on one particular game. Although it was fun, it was a lot of work to pick at the specifics of one game. If I were, instead, to do the entire gaming pack, I would be able to focus on the larger aspects that interest everyone, instead of nitpicking at the smaller matters that only gamers would learn to appreciate.
I think that the class overall helped to expose me the different types of writing styles in the news media industry. I’ve basically learned how to be flexible, and will be able to accept a good job that comes along my way when I am first starting up with my career.
I would recommend to students to focus on something they enjoy and are comfortable talking about. It’s hard to use jargon you don’t understand just to make sure your writing style fits the audience you intend to target.
Saturday, December 8, 2007
Portal Feature
Valve Orange Box
60 Seconds
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THIS HIGHLY AWAITED PACKAGE CONTAINS THE POPULAR “HALF LIFE 2’ AND ITS SEQUEL, WHICH FOLLOWS THE SILENT PROTAGONIST GORDON FREEMAN.
TEAM FORTRESS TWO (2) IS A FIRST PERSON SHOOTING GAME WITH SPECIALIZED CHARACTERS THAT REQUIRE A LARGE ATTENTION TO TEAMWORK.
LASTLY, THE HIGHLY ANTICIPATED GAME “PORTAL” IS INCLUDED, WHICH JUGGLES DARK HUMOR AND MULTIPLE PHYSICAL PUZZLE CHALLENEGES.
OVERALL, VALVE’S ORANGE BOX PACKAGE IS THE IDEAL GIFT FOR GAMERS WHO ENJOY TOYING WITH A VARIETY OF GAMES. PUT IT ON YOUR LIST THIS CHRISTMAS, AND ALL YOUR SHOPPING NEEDS WILL BE FULFILLED.
Images courtesy of www.half-life2.com
This image previews: Blue portal, weighted storage cube, Chell through blue portal, fizzler in front of red button
This image previews: Both blue and orange portals open
This image previews: turret searching for Chell, attempting to shoot
REWRITE: Camping Out On Campus
It's an unusually sunny day in downtown San Jose today, which may have prompted the dozens of high school and college students wait in line for tonight's concert at San Jose State's Event Center, which is hosting a show from the ever-popular band Fall Out Boy alongside up-and-coming Plain White Ts, and the pop-inducing Cute Is What We Aim For.
Many fans live in the Bay Area, but there were a handful of college students who drove from out of town. Nicole, 21, drove from Stockton with her friend. They informed their professors in advance that they would be missing class, and drove the two hours. Prepared for a long day's wait, they brought a foldout love seat, blankets galore, and tons of food and drinks.
Two other students from Fresno left at 3:00 a.m. and arrived in downtown San Jose at 7:30 a.m. "There was only the group in front of us and the group behind us," said Nicole while gesturing to her left and right, "when we arrived this morning." They, like Nicole, were also prepared for the long day. Having also informed their professors ("They weren't happy we missed class," said one of the girls with a slight giggle), they brought sleeping bags and books to read.
One parent brought a folding chair and waited in line for his twelve-year-old daughter while she attended school.
Gabby, 35, left Antioch with her two daughters at 11:00 a.m. and are waiting in excitement to see Gym Class Heroes together. Having already seen and met the band, the three women are anticipating a great show from their favorite band.
Some left early to get to the front of the line for different reasons. Clancey, a Fresno State student, says that being at the front of the line means avoiding the rest of the crowd in line and within the venue. "There's so many people," she says "that it's more convenient to be in front of the stage instead of having to wade through the entire crowd. It's a good way to avoid being crushed."
Overall, the turnout was decent at 1:00 p.m. this afternoon, where people of all ages gathered to appreciate the musical onslaught that approaches later tonight. Whether parent or student, hundreds of people enjoy and support the Event Center's concert tonight, and will be sure to have the time of their lives.
Many fans live in the Bay Area, but there were a handful of college students who drove from out of town. Nicole, 21, drove from Stockton with her friend. They informed their professors in advance that they would be missing class, and drove the two hours. Prepared for a long day's wait, they brought a foldout love seat, blankets galore, and tons of food and drinks.
Two other students from Fresno left at 3:00 a.m. and arrived in downtown San Jose at 7:30 a.m. "There was only the group in front of us and the group behind us," said Nicole while gesturing to her left and right, "when we arrived this morning." They, like Nicole, were also prepared for the long day. Having also informed their professors ("They weren't happy we missed class," said one of the girls with a slight giggle), they brought sleeping bags and books to read.
One parent brought a folding chair and waited in line for his twelve-year-old daughter while she attended school.
Gabby, 35, left Antioch with her two daughters at 11:00 a.m. and are waiting in excitement to see Gym Class Heroes together. Having already seen and met the band, the three women are anticipating a great show from their favorite band.
Some left early to get to the front of the line for different reasons. Clancey, a Fresno State student, says that being at the front of the line means avoiding the rest of the crowd in line and within the venue. "There's so many people," she says "that it's more convenient to be in front of the stage instead of having to wade through the entire crowd. It's a good way to avoid being crushed."
Overall, the turnout was decent at 1:00 p.m. this afternoon, where people of all ages gathered to appreciate the musical onslaught that approaches later tonight. Whether parent or student, hundreds of people enjoy and support the Event Center's concert tonight, and will be sure to have the time of their lives.
Thursday, December 6, 2007
Topical Blog Posts
Topical Post #1
"Holiday" Trees vs. Christmas Trees
Last year, Target department stores started selling "Holiday" trees instead of Christmas trees. Is it really so necessary to give such a distinguishing title to a popular, commercialized event to avoid offending the masses?
In recent days it has become increasingly hard to bring up controversial or even important topics without someone calling out or finding offense. It seems impossible to be able to resolve topics that need handling.
Abortion, for example, is a heavily-debated topic that many people find offensive. Each person has a unique opinion, and yet it cannot be discussed because any person will put their foot down and claim that such an idea is inappropriate, to the point where women are going to underground abortion centers and dying because of unsterilized utensils or improper procedures.
The situation in recent days has become out of hand, and needs to be taken care of. If a commercialized holiday with Christian roots has not held any complaints for the people who trade gifts on a yearly basis, why should the name change just because the voices have become louder?
People have the right to voice their opinion, but the consequences of their actions must also be considered if it is to effect those who have not previously held grudges.
Topical Blog #2
Wii Wish You A Merry Christmas...
Or maybe we can't. Nintendo has been pumping out Wiis for months, and have even had to open new factories to help speed the shipment process. However, the inability for customers to purchase Wiis may not be at fault with Nintendo.
Many companies that carry and sell Wiis (such as Target, Wal-Mart, and Circuit City) also have employees that keep the popular gaming console hidden away in the stock room for themselves, and purchase it just after clocking out.
Although these employees are customers, they are preventing people who have taken them time out of their day to purchase it in the appropriate fashion. Some companies don't allow customers to pre-purchase or keep the console on hold at all to allow other customers (or perhaps employees) to purchase the Wii.
It is not Nintendo's responsibility but the managers and owners of these companies to keep their employees in check. The employees also have rights to purchase it... as long as they haven't kept one in the back. Perhaps these stores should implement a law that does not allow employees to purchase any game console from their branch.
Whatever happens, customers should be priority and should be able to purchase what they are looking for.
Topical Blog #3
"Your or You're - Which is it?"
In recent years it seems as though students and teachers alike have forgotten their homophones. I can't remember the number of times I've read over my peers' work and finding atrocious grammar and spelling mistakes. I was frustrated to the point where I created a blog on MySpace and linked to a Wikihow site that showed the difference between the two words. The title of my blog? "How to use English!"
It is utterly disappointed to see such inept writing, professors and high school teachers giving students' papers only a cursory glance without really looking into literally what is being written. This laziness is and will always be the downfall of students' writing skills.
The Writing Skills Test required by all students at San Jose State University is one of the biggest wastes of time. The test requires a written portion and an objective portion. In the second half after the essay, students are required to read passages with underlined words or phrases. If incorrect, the test-taker must bubble in the correct answer. Some of these questions contained some of the most basic elements of the English language. It was laughable at how easily students were able to pass it.
The standard for good English-writing needs to be set at a higher pace, or American students will fall behind.
Topical Blog #4
"The Golden Compass"
The "His Dark Materials" trilogy written by Phillip Pullman has been given a lot of press coverage due to the recent movie release of the first in the series "The Golden Compass" What many movie-goers don't know, however, is that the entire series is based on a lot of strongly anti-god and pro-atheist thoughts.
Because the movie is marketed towards children, however, many of the anti-god comments and ideas have been removed. Parents, however, may not like the idea what the book trilogy suggests. Many are unaware that the book series is now being translated to the silver screen. I had never heard of the series, but once I found that the series was based on controversial ideas, I was intrigued and picked up the trilogy from a department store. Although the story is based around a young girl, there are many people she meets along the way that parallel to religious people (who are deemed evil) versus those who are not religious.
Overall, the series has been given a lot of attention. Despite the negative connotation this book denotes towards the religious, it still has value and can be beneficial if viewed in the proper aspect.
"Holiday" Trees vs. Christmas Trees
Last year, Target department stores started selling "Holiday" trees instead of Christmas trees. Is it really so necessary to give such a distinguishing title to a popular, commercialized event to avoid offending the masses?
In recent days it has become increasingly hard to bring up controversial or even important topics without someone calling out or finding offense. It seems impossible to be able to resolve topics that need handling.
Abortion, for example, is a heavily-debated topic that many people find offensive. Each person has a unique opinion, and yet it cannot be discussed because any person will put their foot down and claim that such an idea is inappropriate, to the point where women are going to underground abortion centers and dying because of unsterilized utensils or improper procedures.
The situation in recent days has become out of hand, and needs to be taken care of. If a commercialized holiday with Christian roots has not held any complaints for the people who trade gifts on a yearly basis, why should the name change just because the voices have become louder?
People have the right to voice their opinion, but the consequences of their actions must also be considered if it is to effect those who have not previously held grudges.
Topical Blog #2
Wii Wish You A Merry Christmas...
Or maybe we can't. Nintendo has been pumping out Wiis for months, and have even had to open new factories to help speed the shipment process. However, the inability for customers to purchase Wiis may not be at fault with Nintendo.
Many companies that carry and sell Wiis (such as Target, Wal-Mart, and Circuit City) also have employees that keep the popular gaming console hidden away in the stock room for themselves, and purchase it just after clocking out.
Although these employees are customers, they are preventing people who have taken them time out of their day to purchase it in the appropriate fashion. Some companies don't allow customers to pre-purchase or keep the console on hold at all to allow other customers (or perhaps employees) to purchase the Wii.
It is not Nintendo's responsibility but the managers and owners of these companies to keep their employees in check. The employees also have rights to purchase it... as long as they haven't kept one in the back. Perhaps these stores should implement a law that does not allow employees to purchase any game console from their branch.
Whatever happens, customers should be priority and should be able to purchase what they are looking for.
Topical Blog #3
"Your or You're - Which is it?"
In recent years it seems as though students and teachers alike have forgotten their homophones. I can't remember the number of times I've read over my peers' work and finding atrocious grammar and spelling mistakes. I was frustrated to the point where I created a blog on MySpace and linked to a Wikihow site that showed the difference between the two words. The title of my blog? "How to use English!"
It is utterly disappointed to see such inept writing, professors and high school teachers giving students' papers only a cursory glance without really looking into literally what is being written. This laziness is and will always be the downfall of students' writing skills.
The Writing Skills Test required by all students at San Jose State University is one of the biggest wastes of time. The test requires a written portion and an objective portion. In the second half after the essay, students are required to read passages with underlined words or phrases. If incorrect, the test-taker must bubble in the correct answer. Some of these questions contained some of the most basic elements of the English language. It was laughable at how easily students were able to pass it.
The standard for good English-writing needs to be set at a higher pace, or American students will fall behind.
Topical Blog #4
"The Golden Compass"
The "His Dark Materials" trilogy written by Phillip Pullman has been given a lot of press coverage due to the recent movie release of the first in the series "The Golden Compass" What many movie-goers don't know, however, is that the entire series is based on a lot of strongly anti-god and pro-atheist thoughts.
Because the movie is marketed towards children, however, many of the anti-god comments and ideas have been removed. Parents, however, may not like the idea what the book trilogy suggests. Many are unaware that the book series is now being translated to the silver screen. I had never heard of the series, but once I found that the series was based on controversial ideas, I was intrigued and picked up the trilogy from a department store. Although the story is based around a young girl, there are many people she meets along the way that parallel to religious people (who are deemed evil) versus those who are not religious.
Overall, the series has been given a lot of attention. Despite the negative connotation this book denotes towards the religious, it still has value and can be beneficial if viewed in the proper aspect.
Thursday, November 29, 2007
Camping Out On Campus
It's an unusually sunny day in downtown San Jose today. Few clouds linger in the sky, but dozens of high school and college students wait in line for tonight's concert at San Jose State's Event Center, which is hosting a show from the ever-popular band Fall Out Boy alongside up-and-coming Plain White Ts, and the pop-inducing Cute Is What We Aim For.
Many fans live in the Bay Area, but there were a handful of college students who drove from out of town. Nicole, 21, drove from Stockton with her friend. They informed their professors in advance that they would be missing class, and drove the two hours. Prepared for a long day's wait, they brought a foldout love seat, blankets galore, and tons of food and drinks.
Two other students from Fresno left at 3:00 a.m. and arrived in downtown San Jose at 7:30 a.m. "There was only the group in front of us and the group behind us," said Nicole while gesturing to her left and right, "when we arrived this morning." They, like Nicole, were also prepared for the long day. Having also informed their professors ("They weren't happy we missed class," said one of the girls with a slight giggle), they brought sleeping bags and books to read.
One parent brought a folding chair and waited in line for his twelve-year-old daughter while she attended school.
Gabby, 35, left Antioch with her daughters at 11:00 a.m. and are waiting in excitement to see Gym Class Heroes together. Having already seen and met the band, the three women are anticipating a great show from their favorite band.
Overall, the turnout was decent at 1:00 am this afternoon, where people of all ages gathered to appreciate the musical onslaught that approaches later tonight. Whether parent or student, hundreds of people enjoy and support the Event Center's concert tonight, and will be sure to have the time of their lives.
Many fans live in the Bay Area, but there were a handful of college students who drove from out of town. Nicole, 21, drove from Stockton with her friend. They informed their professors in advance that they would be missing class, and drove the two hours. Prepared for a long day's wait, they brought a foldout love seat, blankets galore, and tons of food and drinks.
Two other students from Fresno left at 3:00 a.m. and arrived in downtown San Jose at 7:30 a.m. "There was only the group in front of us and the group behind us," said Nicole while gesturing to her left and right, "when we arrived this morning." They, like Nicole, were also prepared for the long day. Having also informed their professors ("They weren't happy we missed class," said one of the girls with a slight giggle), they brought sleeping bags and books to read.
One parent brought a folding chair and waited in line for his twelve-year-old daughter while she attended school.
Gabby, 35, left Antioch with her daughters at 11:00 a.m. and are waiting in excitement to see Gym Class Heroes together. Having already seen and met the band, the three women are anticipating a great show from their favorite band.
Overall, the turnout was decent at 1:00 am this afternoon, where people of all ages gathered to appreciate the musical onslaught that approaches later tonight. Whether parent or student, hundreds of people enjoy and support the Event Center's concert tonight, and will be sure to have the time of their lives.
Friday, November 9, 2007
Magazine Choice
I don’t read magazines anymore, but one that I would not mind picking up is Guitar World. I love music, and not only does this magazine focus on different guitar brands and their different aspects, but also music and which guitars certain artists from various bands prefer to use and why. In every issue they have six songs in the back of the magazine that are transcribed into notes and tabs (an easier form of music notes) so that people who enjoy those popular songs can play them if they have a guitar. They also take one guitar and break its parts apart to show you its capabilities.
The audience to which this magazine is geared towards is one that appreciates guitars, loves music (specifically the rock and metal genre). The writing style is more laid back than other magazines (such as Time and Newsweek) because their target audience is more casual. The music/artist reviews are more fun, but the writers do go into specifics and really get down to the nitty-gritty details of each band, why their album is or isn’t good, and why they are or aren’t successful. The interviews focus more on the artist’s inspiration and what drives them to create new songs.
To get a feel for the type of audience GW aims to please without having to purchase an copy, they have a website online:
The audience to which this magazine is geared towards is one that appreciates guitars, loves music (specifically the rock and metal genre). The writing style is more laid back than other magazines (such as Time and Newsweek) because their target audience is more casual. The music/artist reviews are more fun, but the writers do go into specifics and really get down to the nitty-gritty details of each band, why their album is or isn’t good, and why they are or aren’t successful. The interviews focus more on the artist’s inspiration and what drives them to create new songs.
To get a feel for the type of audience GW aims to please without having to purchase an copy, they have a website online:
Thursday, November 1, 2007
Monday, October 29, 2007
Leica Cameras
Leitz, Camera, Action!
It is no secret that what Nazi Germany did to the Jewish community between World Wars One and Two was a complete catastrophe. Only one man, however, can recount the story of what one German family did to help out hundreds of Jewish families during that time.
George Gilbert has practiced the art of photography his entire life. It was how he met an old colleague, Norman Lipton, a previous editor for the magazine Popular Photography in 1952. Before he passed away, Lipton told Gilbert in the 1990s of his experiences at Leica and what was known as the "Leica Freedom Train."
Gilbert began speaking without much ado of the tale Lipton told him. He cracked some jokes ("Are there any English majors in here? Get out!"), made up words ("Is universalization even a word?") and proved to be an interesting speaker. Gilbert began with a brief history of Germany's history, then began the courageous tale of the Leitz's family's work.
In 1925, the Leitz manufacturers created a pocket-sized camera called the Leica Camera which could take brief shots of moving pictures and changed the entire photographic world.
The Leitz family were horrified at the ruckus caused by the Nazis, and decided to take action. Their work began when their manager revealed he needed to be relocated because he didn't want his Jewish wife to be exposed to any harm. The Leitzs then relocated him France on the premise that he made part of the Leica's French establishment. The Leica Industry later employed phony workers (Jews, anti-Nazis, and the like), putting them under two weeks of rigorous training to help them understand the Leica jargon, and sent them out of Germany, never to be heard from again.
Many people wonder why the Leitz's story is not as famous as Schindler's List, a famous biographical movie of Oskar Schindler who saved over one thousand Polish Jews during the Holocaust.
The Leitz relayed to Lipton that their story must not be printed while the family was still alive. They have all passed away, and now the tale of their noble subterfuge is being retold all over the United States.
The story was first published in 1998 in England by the Reform Jewish, and once more by Lipton in Photo International in December 1999.
It is no secret that what Nazi Germany did to the Jewish community between World Wars One and Two was a complete catastrophe. Only one man, however, can recount the story of what one German family did to help out hundreds of Jewish families during that time.
George Gilbert has practiced the art of photography his entire life. It was how he met an old colleague, Norman Lipton, a previous editor for the magazine Popular Photography in 1952. Before he passed away, Lipton told Gilbert in the 1990s of his experiences at Leica and what was known as the "Leica Freedom Train."
Gilbert began speaking without much ado of the tale Lipton told him. He cracked some jokes ("Are there any English majors in here? Get out!"), made up words ("Is universalization even a word?") and proved to be an interesting speaker. Gilbert began with a brief history of Germany's history, then began the courageous tale of the Leitz's family's work.
In 1925, the Leitz manufacturers created a pocket-sized camera called the Leica Camera which could take brief shots of moving pictures and changed the entire photographic world.
The Leitz family were horrified at the ruckus caused by the Nazis, and decided to take action. Their work began when their manager revealed he needed to be relocated because he didn't want his Jewish wife to be exposed to any harm. The Leitzs then relocated him France on the premise that he made part of the Leica's French establishment. The Leica Industry later employed phony workers (Jews, anti-Nazis, and the like), putting them under two weeks of rigorous training to help them understand the Leica jargon, and sent them out of Germany, never to be heard from again.
Many people wonder why the Leitz's story is not as famous as Schindler's List, a famous biographical movie of Oskar Schindler who saved over one thousand Polish Jews during the Holocaust.
The Leitz relayed to Lipton that their story must not be printed while the family was still alive. They have all passed away, and now the tale of their noble subterfuge is being retold all over the United States.
The story was first published in 1998 in England by the Reform Jewish, and once more by Lipton in Photo International in December 1999.
Unknown German Family Revealed to Have Helped Jewish Families Escape Nazi Germany
San Jose State University’s chapel was the meeting point for George Gilbert, one of the few men who knows the story of the Leica Freedom Train.
George Gilbert has practiced the art of photography his entire life. It was how he met an old colleague, Norman Lipton, a previous editor for the magazine Popular Photography in 1952. Before he passed away, Lipton told Gilbert in the 1990s of his experiences at Leica and what was known as the "Leica Freedom Train."
In 1925, the Leitz manufacturers created a pocket-sized camera called the Leica Camera which could take brief shots of moving pictures and changed the entire photographic world.
The Leitz family were horrified at the ruckus caused by the Nazis, and decided to take action. Their work began when their manager revealed he needed to be relocated because he didn't want his Jewish wife to be exposed to any harm. The Leitzs then relocated him France on the premise that he made part of the Leica's French establishment. The Leica Industry later employed phony workers (Jews, anti-Nazis, and the like), putting them under two weeks of rigorous training to help them understand the Leica jargon, and sent them out of Germany, never to be heard from again.
Many people wonder why the Leitz's story is not as famous as Schindler's List, a famous biographical movie of Oskar Schindler who saved over one thousand Polish Jews during the Holocaust.
The Leitz relayed to Lipton that their story must not be printed while the family was still alive. They have all passed away, and now the tale of their noble subterfuge is being retold all over the United States.
The story was first published in 1998 in England by the Reform Jewish, and once more by Lipton in Photo International in December 1999.
Gilbert now travels across America in order to retell the Leitz family's tale.
Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Missing work
Apple Rewrite
Ten tons of apples showered Highway 101 in Sonoma County yesterday morning when a trucker lost control of his tractor while navigating over partially repaired pavement.
The overturned apples cause the road crew to shut down one northbound lane, severely backing up the morning commute. A morning mist made the already-slick, apple-coated pavement even more hazardous.
According to California Highway Patrol officer Wayne Ziese, truck driver Robert Urbins was transporting the apples to Sebastopol when he said he heard a cable snap. While navigating over the uneven pavement, the rear flatbed started "whipping" when apples started scattering over the asphalt.
The road crews arrived at 9:45 am to clear the mess, according to Ziese. The apples piled two feet high and covered 200 to 300 feet of pavement, landing nearly 1,000 feet away in the median and on the shoulder of the highway.
Barn Fire –
A barn fire was reported at 4 a.m., killing fifteen horses and injuring two.
The barn burned down one day before the opening of the fall racing season at the Bay Meadows Racecourse in San Mateo.
The fire smoldered until midday, where it was reported that arson is suspected as the cause of fire. Fire chief Bernard Perry said, “The fire exploded near the center of the barn. Flames were shooting out of the building when we got here. The fire is definitely suspicious.”
“Those are my best friends,” said Albert Ramos, a jockey from San Diego, “I love horses more than I do people. I feel like I want to cry.”
No word yet on any leads for the suspected arson.
Got what it takes to be a reporter?
I enjoy reading. I consume a lot of books and magazines.
Mostly true - 2 pts
For me, writing is rewarding. And I am confident that people genuinely enjoy the stuff I write.
Not true
I don't pay much attention to spelling. My grammar and punctuation probably ain't great, either.
Not true - 2pts
I'm generally adept at computer technology: sending email, downloading files, shooting digital photos, etc.
Mostly true - 1pt
I can organize my ideas and write quickly when I need to.
Mostly true - 2 pts
I'd make a good game show contestant because I'm pretty good at remembering facts and trivia.
Not true
I'm efficient and self-sufficient when it comes to doing extensive library or Internet research.
Mostly true - 2pts
I'm generally more curious than most people I know.
Not true.
In public situations, I'm pretty shy; I avoid asking questions in class, for instance.
Mostly true
I think it's unpatriotic to question or criticize our government.
Not true - 1 pt
When I choose a career, I'll require a stable, 9-to-5 job where my workday is routine and I make big money.
Not true - 3 pts
If I really want something, I'm tenacious until I get it.
Not true
When I'm under pressure, I can keep my cool and stay focused without losing my temper.
Mostly true - 1 pt
When strangers or teachers criticize what I write, it really bugs me. I mean, who do they think they are?
Not true - 2 pts
I feel that the test asked the right questions, but that it didn't give enough wiggle room. I'm at a point in my life where a lot of things are changing for me, so some of the answers I agreed with while the other half I didn't. I believe that once I've become more outgoing and organized then I'll be able to manage a job as a reporter or journalist.
Top News 4
The news story I thought was important was the shutting down of the MLK library's database. This set back tons of students who rely on the database for research. The computer system has been shut down since this past Sunday and the problem has yet to be resolved.
This definitely has impact on students who attend SJSU and also residents of San Jose who prefer this library or who regularly check out books from there.
It has proximity for SJSU students, as the building is on campus.
There is timeliness and currency, because it happened just recently. Some people aren't even aware yet that the databases are down.
It conflicts with students' research capabilities through the school's library network.
Also, the Body Worlds exhibit at the Tech Museum has had a lot of controversy because the exhibit displays real human bodies.
It has bizarreness/controversy, because people aren’t used to seeing dead human bodies so close.
There is conflict, because people are not comfortable with that.
It has proximity for Bay Area residents, and especially for San Jose State students and down town San Jose residents.
There is currency because it was recently added.
I have added this here because I forgot to post it last week.
Magazine Day –
The lecture was not something I expected. I was waiting to hear more of the magazine's structure, how they form articles and other ways that magazines function. Instead, we learned more about the evolution of photojournalism since 9/11 and how we view photography as opposed to videos.
He had a lot of interesting things to say, although he took a while to process his thoughts in order to present his information correctly. All of the photographs he presented on his PowerPoint lecture each had a point to prove. I especially enjoyed the ones with people who seemed apathetic/indifferent to the plane crashes. It showed that people don't always react the same way to a tragic situation.
This is all the work I had done that you didn't have a grade for.
Wednesday, October 17, 2007
Smith and Carlos Statues
Tommie Smith and John Carlos Statues Honored
Despite the clouds promising rain, students stopped near the lawn outside of Clark Hall to recognize the second anniversary of the erection of the Tommie Smith and John Carlos statutes, which have recently been vandalized.
Loud congo and reggae music played into dreary afternoon while students and passersby gathered before a speech was made to recognize the protests the two Olympians had made. Speakers honored the two men the statues represented and spoke about the racial and class issues which the two athletes protested. To further honor the men, students wrote inspirational words and sayings on red flags that were planted near the foot of the statue. Many shared the same important idea: "I stand for equality and freedom for all races and genders," as well as "social tolerance and liberty." A plaque dedicated to both men was placed just in front of the flags, representing the appreciation for their protests and hard work.
The speech relayed messages of equality and respect for all in the United States, and many in the audience seemed to reflect the sentiments that Smith and Carlos hoped to extend. The event was rather short and lasted only an hour, but in that time faculty and students alike were able to appreciate the work that not only Smith and Carlos performed, but also similar protesting acts that were made in the U.S. to counter racism and hate. Although the weather drove students away and seemed to drive the Associated Students team to pack their things fairly quickly, many were moved by the idea that two men made a huge difference (even at the risk of their own lives and reputations) to help mold the world into a better place.
Despite the clouds promising rain, students stopped near the lawn outside of Clark Hall to recognize the second anniversary of the erection of the Tommie Smith and John Carlos statutes, which have recently been vandalized.
Loud congo and reggae music played into dreary afternoon while students and passersby gathered before a speech was made to recognize the protests the two Olympians had made. Speakers honored the two men the statues represented and spoke about the racial and class issues which the two athletes protested. To further honor the men, students wrote inspirational words and sayings on red flags that were planted near the foot of the statue. Many shared the same important idea: "I stand for equality and freedom for all races and genders," as well as "social tolerance and liberty." A plaque dedicated to both men was placed just in front of the flags, representing the appreciation for their protests and hard work.
The speech relayed messages of equality and respect for all in the United States, and many in the audience seemed to reflect the sentiments that Smith and Carlos hoped to extend. The event was rather short and lasted only an hour, but in that time faculty and students alike were able to appreciate the work that not only Smith and Carlos performed, but also similar protesting acts that were made in the U.S. to counter racism and hate. Although the weather drove students away and seemed to drive the Associated Students team to pack their things fairly quickly, many were moved by the idea that two men made a huge difference (even at the risk of their own lives and reputations) to help mold the world into a better place.
Monday, October 15, 2007
Broadcast Day
I wasn't sure what to expect from the speakers, but I really enjoyed watching the slideshow (once it finally began working!).
It was interesting to see how long the group had been formed and the places they've traveled. I also enjoyed the radio show broadcast simulation. I found it amusing, but I also had a faint idea of how the people in the 1920s (I believe) felt when radio was their only form of entertainment.
I especially loved the video that showed how radio shows and segments were recorded. I love the sound effects room; it was all really creative. It reminded me of the last time I visited Universal Studios and was able to watch how black-and-white video sound effects and vocals were recorded. It was essentially the same idea as the radio broadcasts.
One guest I remember particularly in the audience was Lloyd Lacuesta, because I remember seeing him broadcasting on (if I remember correctly) KRON 4 news.
Overall, it was a nice experience. I don't think I would want to work in the broadcast segment, but as many people stated, if you're planning on working the mass communications department, it's best to know a little about everything, because you may end up changing your career.
It was interesting to see how long the group had been formed and the places they've traveled. I also enjoyed the radio show broadcast simulation. I found it amusing, but I also had a faint idea of how the people in the 1920s (I believe) felt when radio was their only form of entertainment.
I especially loved the video that showed how radio shows and segments were recorded. I love the sound effects room; it was all really creative. It reminded me of the last time I visited Universal Studios and was able to watch how black-and-white video sound effects and vocals were recorded. It was essentially the same idea as the radio broadcasts.
One guest I remember particularly in the audience was Lloyd Lacuesta, because I remember seeing him broadcasting on (if I remember correctly) KRON 4 news.
Overall, it was a nice experience. I don't think I would want to work in the broadcast segment, but as many people stated, if you're planning on working the mass communications department, it's best to know a little about everything, because you may end up changing your career.
Wednesday, October 10, 2007
Top News
Today's Spartan Daily front cover had an article that stated drug and alcohol violations have spiked. "...the total UPD arrests for drug violations went up 31.96 percent"
This article definitely has proximity and impact on SJSU students.
I also think it's slightly bizarre, since the arrest rates for drug violations jumped up over 1/3, which is almost double.
It has currency, because it is talking about recent arrests and drug/alcohol violations. Also, another article on the cover stated that one fraternity member was expelled because he was told he wasn't allowed alcohol due to a previous conflict, but continued to drink anyway.
This article definitely has proximity and impact on SJSU students.
I also think it's slightly bizarre, since the arrest rates for drug violations jumped up over 1/3, which is almost double.
It has currency, because it is talking about recent arrests and drug/alcohol violations. Also, another article on the cover stated that one fraternity member was expelled because he was told he wasn't allowed alcohol due to a previous conflict, but continued to drink anyway.
REWRITE - Scholarship
A 14-year-old San Jose high school senior was awarded with $1 million scholarship. He plans to attend San Jose State University next fall, and major in electrical engineering.
Billy Bradley will graduate with honors this June from Lincoln High School as valedictorian.
Bradley lives with his uncle in downtown San Jose.
Billy Bradley will graduate with honors this June from Lincoln High School as valedictorian.
Bradley lives with his uncle in downtown San Jose.
Sunday, October 7, 2007
Top News (for 9/28)
The news story I found intriguing was the opening of the Body Worlds exhibit in the Tech Museum.
This exhibit is controversial and bizarre, as it uses real human bodies to depict healthy body parts versus ones infected with diseases, cancers, and other teratogenic factors.
It has currency and timeliness, because this exhibit opened very recently.
It has proximity, because it affects people in San Jose, and the Bay Area in general.
It has prominence, because the Tech Museum is very famous in this area.
It conflicts with peoples' ideas about whether it is morally acceptable to display dead human bodies.
This exhibit is controversial and bizarre, as it uses real human bodies to depict healthy body parts versus ones infected with diseases, cancers, and other teratogenic factors.
It has currency and timeliness, because this exhibit opened very recently.
It has proximity, because it affects people in San Jose, and the Bay Area in general.
It has prominence, because the Tech Museum is very famous in this area.
It conflicts with peoples' ideas about whether it is morally acceptable to display dead human bodies.
Wednesday, October 3, 2007
Top News
The news story I thought was important was the shutting down of the MLK library's database. This set back tons of students who rely on the database for research. The computer system has been shut down since this past Sunday and the problem has yet to be resolved.
This definitely has impact on students who attend SJSU and also residents of San Jose who prefer this library or who regularly check out books from there.
It has proximity for SJSU students, as the building is on campus.
There is timeliness and currency, because it happened just recently. Some people aren't evevn aware yet that the databases are down.
It conflicts with students' research capabilities through the school's library network.
This definitely has impact on students who attend SJSU and also residents of San Jose who prefer this library or who regularly check out books from there.
It has proximity for SJSU students, as the building is on campus.
There is timeliness and currency, because it happened just recently. Some people aren't evevn aware yet that the databases are down.
It conflicts with students' research capabilities through the school's library network.
Also, the Body Worlds exhibit at the Tech Museum has had a lot of controversy because the exhibit displays real human bodies.
It has bizarreness/controversy, because people aren’t used to seeing dead human bodies so close.
There is conflict, because people are not comfortable with that.
It has proximity for Bay Area residents, and especially for San Jose State students and down town San Jose residents.
There is currency because it was recently added.
I have added this here because I forgot to post it last week.
Tuesday, October 2, 2007
Magazine Day
The lecture was not something I expected. I was waiting to hear more of the magazine's structure, how they form articles and other ways that magazines function. Instead, we learned more about the evolution of photojournalism since 9/11 and how we view photography as opposed to videos.
He had a lot of interesting things to say, although he took a while to process his thoughts in order to present his information correctly. All of the photographs he presented on his PowerPoint lecture each had a point to prove. I especially enjoyed the ones with people who seemed apathetic/indifferent to the plane crashes. It showed that people don't always react the same way to a tragic situation.
He had a lot of interesting things to say, although he took a while to process his thoughts in order to present his information correctly. All of the photographs he presented on his PowerPoint lecture each had a point to prove. I especially enjoyed the ones with people who seemed apathetic/indifferent to the plane crashes. It showed that people don't always react the same way to a tragic situation.
Tuesday, September 25, 2007
REWRITE: Apples
Ten tons of apples showered Highway 101 in Sonoma County yesterday morning when a trucker lost control of his tractor while navigating over partially repaired pavement.
The overturned apples cause the road crew to shut down one northbound lane, severely backing up the morning commute. A morning mist made the already-slick, apple-coated pavement even more hazardous.
According to California Highway Patrol officer Wayne Ziese, truck driver Robert Urbins was transporting the apples to Sebastopol when he said he heard a cable snap. While navigating over the uneven pavement, the rear flatbed started "whipping" when apples started scattering over the asphalt.
The road crews arrived at 9:45 am to clear the mess, according to Ziese. The apples piled two feet high and covered 200 to 300 feet of pavement, landing nearly 1,000 feet away in the median and on the shoulder of the highway.
This entry includes the mistakes corrected on the paper (not verbatim).
Birthday Cake
Tulsa (Okla.) – Mabel McCullough didn’t expect to receive two ladder companies, five fire engines and twenty-four firefighters yesterday for her birthday.
Tulsa’s senior citizen was innocently celebrating her 95th birthday at a party organized by her church’s women’s group with a cake topped with 95 candles. “By the time we had them all lit, it looked like a torch,” said Eddi Carlin, a guest at the party. A cloud of smoke from the blown-out candles set off a smoke alarm, which alerted the fire department.
“In my 23 years on the job, I’ve seen a lot of things set off a fire alarm, but I don’t think I’ve ever heard of one going off because of a birthday cake,” said Fire Chief Lonnie Lamb. Although the firefighters declined birthday cake, they did take a picture with McCullough before leaving.
I'm not sure whether "Tulsa's senior citizen" works in the first paragraph after the lead, because I have yet to mention how old she is in the lead.
Also, "they did take a picture with McCullough before leaving." I'm assuming they left after taking the photograph, so I'm not sure whether that is appropriate to mention either.
Wednesday, September 19, 2007
Top News
The top news story I found important for this week was the article in the Spartan Daily about students finding inopportune times and places to take naps on campus. I think that this really highlights the fact that students just don't get an adequate amount of sleep in the past few years, especially working college students. I think that it really shows just how much work students have to put effort into without getting time to spend for themselves. I think that it's ridiculous to see students napping between classes when they should be getting tons of rest the night before even if they aren't taking tests everyday.
This impacts students on a national level, as there are college campuses in every state.
This impacts students on a national level, as there are college campuses in every state.
Wednesday, September 12, 2007
Top News (9/12)
Today I picked up the Spartan Daily and read the headlining news about a Fraternity-related robbery. I think that this particular article is severely important locally, as there have already been previous robberies on campus (stolen laptops and bicycles). People really should be aware of these things, because they could have their items stolen if they're careless with them.
I think the timeliness has a huge impact, because the three robberies have all happened within a month's time. I also think the proximity really will hit fellow students, especially those who live on campus. I think that the second crime (40 stolen laptops) is bizarre, because it would be noticeable if someone was carrying an armful of laptops out of a building.
I think the timeliness has a huge impact, because the three robberies have all happened within a month's time. I also think the proximity really will hit fellow students, especially those who live on campus. I think that the second crime (40 stolen laptops) is bizarre, because it would be noticeable if someone was carrying an armful of laptops out of a building.
Monday, September 10, 2007
The Fog Index
Pornography has always played a large part in controversial issues all over the world, especially in America. People everywhere have different opinions on whether it should be allowed, banned completely or only allowed in certain stores. Those who are accepting of pornography clash with those who feel that it shouldn’t be allowed. The more liberal-minded feel that banning pornography would be violating free speech. Those who are more conservative feel that allowing pornography shouldn’t be allowed at all and is a horrible form of “art.” Before these situations are analyzed, pornography must be defined in order to take a closer look at what should be banned and/or accepted in society.
This particular section has about 110 words. It is the introduction for a previous philosophy paper on the regulation or banning of pornography.
Average word count per sentence: 18
Words with 3+ syllables: 16 (not including repeated words)
Add the two figures: 34
Multiply by 0.4 = 13.6
I find it interesting that I have to dumb my writing down in order for the general public to be able to understand exactly what it is I've written.
Sunday, September 9, 2007
Copy Edit the World
I found two grammatical problems when I was in Sunnyvale this Friday.
The both stores were a salon. The first had the world "acials" instead of "facials" painted on the window. The second salon had "Walk ins - Welcome" The hyphen should be placed in front of "walk." The entire phrase should read "Walk-ins are welcome"
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http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/Breakability/School%20stuff/IMG_0964edit.jpg
Something else I found was in an old yearbook. The editor had a fun time using commas, and thus ended up abusing the punctuation. The following are mistakes that should be corrected:
"...Branham has a very bright future(,) as students and staff..."
"Take a look back and reflect on the accomplishments that these Bruins have achieved ... Like blazing comets..."
http://s36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/Breakability/School%20stuff/?action=view¤t=copyedit_03.jpg
The both stores were a salon. The first had the world "acials" instead of "facials" painted on the window. The second salon had "Walk ins - Welcome" The hyphen should be placed in front of "walk." The entire phrase should read "Walk-ins are welcome"
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/Breakability/School%20stuff/IMG_0962edit.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/Breakability/School%20stuff/IMG_0964edit.jpg
Something else I found was in an old yearbook. The editor had a fun time using commas, and thus ended up abusing the punctuation. The following are mistakes that should be corrected:
"...Branham has a very bright future(,) as students and staff..."
"Take a look back and reflect on the accomplishments that these Bruins have achieved ... Like blazing comets..."
http://s36.photobucket.com/albums/e38/Breakability/School%20stuff/?action=view¤t=copyedit_03.jpg
Wednesday, September 5, 2007
Top News Assignment (week 2)
I found a short article in the San Jose Mercury news about the varying degrees of caffeine in popular sodas. The article states that citrus-based sodas have more caffeine than other flavored sodas.
I believe this is important for people on a national level. Although children, adolescents and young adults tend to drink more, elder peoples also drink it occasionally and can greatly impact the amount people drink and definitely the brand. This will affect many college students as well as high school students who like to pull all nighters for fun and to study, and also the peoples that like to avoid highly-caffeinated drinks.
I believe this is important for people on a national level. Although children, adolescents and young adults tend to drink more, elder peoples also drink it occasionally and can greatly impact the amount people drink and definitely the brand. This will affect many college students as well as high school students who like to pull all nighters for fun and to study, and also the peoples that like to avoid highly-caffeinated drinks.
Tuesday, September 4, 2007
Chevy Chase and Amtrak Train
In class:
Actor and comedian Chevy Chase was appointed to the board of trustees yesterday at Bard College in New York.
At least 15 people died when an Amtrak train collided with 3 locomotives yesterday afternoon near Chase, Md.
The three locomotives were heading northbound and apparently ran a stop sign, according to an Amtrak spokesman.
Actor and comedian Chevy Chase was appointed to the board of trustees yesterday at Bard College in New York.
At least 15 people died when an Amtrak train collided with 3 locomotives yesterday afternoon near Chase, Md.
The three locomotives were heading northbound and apparently ran a stop sign, according to an Amtrak spokesman.
Leads #3
In class:
Actor and comedian Chevy Chase was appointed to the board of trustees yesterday at Bard College in New York.
Homework:
At least 15 people died yesterday afternoon when an Amtrak train called the Colonial crashed into three Conrail locomotives.
Actor and comedian Chevy Chase was appointed to the board of trustees yesterday at Bard College in New York.
Homework:
At least 15 people died yesterday afternoon when an Amtrak train called the Colonial crashed into three Conrail locomotives.
Saturday, September 1, 2007
Top News Story
The article I found important was located in the Valley section of the San Jose Mercury Newspaper on Thursday, August 30th. The article expresses the importance of being responsible with children during the hot weather. A 2-year-old toddler was left in her caregiver's car while Juhee Hong left her for at least half an hour before the child was rescued. The temperature outside was 90 degrees Fahrenheit outside of the car. The last paragraph states that an 11-month-old baby died in his father's car after his father forgot to take him to day care and left him in the car all day.
I think that this new story is important for people living in the Bay Area, because people need to become more responsible for dependents (and themselves) as the weather climbs into the 80s and 90s. This article impacts a lot of people who live in warmer and humid climates during the summer. The proximity should also shock people and help them become more aware of what they are doing and to become more responsible.
I think that this new story is important for people living in the Bay Area, because people need to become more responsible for dependents (and themselves) as the weather climbs into the 80s and 90s. This article impacts a lot of people who live in warmer and humid climates during the summer. The proximity should also shock people and help them become more aware of what they are doing and to become more responsible.
Leads #2
EDIT: 131 passengers were killed when a US airplane crashed just outside Pittsburgh yesterday, making this the worst US air disaster in the past 3 years.
Leads #1
Lead #1: Time -- yesterday. Where -- Butte County Court. Who -- a local couple was in a traffic accident in March. They sued. Yesterday, the two were awarded $150,000 in damages. They had suffered injuries. That's what the damages were for.
A local couple received $150,000 in damage fees yesterday after suing for suffering from a traffic accident in March.
A snowstorm storm is expected to hit the Sierra Mountains today, according to forecasters, and is expected to be followed by more storms.
Three firefighters were injured while rescuing forty-one families from a burning building on Union Avenue today, according to the police.
Wednesday, August 29, 2007
"Got what it takes to be a reporter?" survey
I enjoy reading. I consume a lot of books and magazines.
Mostly true - 2 pts
For me, writing is rewarding. And I am confident that people genuinely enjoy the stuff I write.
Not true
I don't pay much attention to spelling. My grammar and punctuation probably ain't great, either.
Not true - 2pts
I'm generally adept at computer technology: sending email, downloading files, shooting digital photos, etc.
Mostly true - 1pt
I can organize my ideas and write quickly when I need to.
Mostly true - 2 pts
I'd make a good game show contestant because I'm pretty good at remembering facts and trivia.
Not true
I'm efficient and self-sufficient when it comes to doing extensive library or Internet research.
Mostly true - 2pts
I'm generally more curious than most people I know.
Not true.
In public situations, I'm pretty shy; I avoid asking questions in class, for instance.
Mostly true
I think it's unpatriotic to question or criticize our government.
Not true - 1 pt
When I choose a career, I'll require a stable, 9-to-5 job where my workday is routine and I make big money.
Not true - 3 pts
If I really want something, I'm tenacious until I get it.
Not true
When I'm under pressure, I can keep my cool and stay focused without losing my temper.
Mostly true - 1 pt
When strangers or teachers criticize what I write, it really bugs me. I mean, who do they think they are?
Not true - 2 pts
I feel that the test asked the right questions, but that it didn't give enough wiggle room. I'm at a point in my life where a lot of things are changing for me, so some of the answers I agreed with while the other half I didn't. I believe that once I've become more outgoing and organized then I'll be able to manage a job as a reporter or journalist.
Mostly true - 2 pts
For me, writing is rewarding. And I am confident that people genuinely enjoy the stuff I write.
Not true
I don't pay much attention to spelling. My grammar and punctuation probably ain't great, either.
Not true - 2pts
I'm generally adept at computer technology: sending email, downloading files, shooting digital photos, etc.
Mostly true - 1pt
I can organize my ideas and write quickly when I need to.
Mostly true - 2 pts
I'd make a good game show contestant because I'm pretty good at remembering facts and trivia.
Not true
I'm efficient and self-sufficient when it comes to doing extensive library or Internet research.
Mostly true - 2pts
I'm generally more curious than most people I know.
Not true.
In public situations, I'm pretty shy; I avoid asking questions in class, for instance.
Mostly true
I think it's unpatriotic to question or criticize our government.
Not true - 1 pt
When I choose a career, I'll require a stable, 9-to-5 job where my workday is routine and I make big money.
Not true - 3 pts
If I really want something, I'm tenacious until I get it.
Not true
When I'm under pressure, I can keep my cool and stay focused without losing my temper.
Mostly true - 1 pt
When strangers or teachers criticize what I write, it really bugs me. I mean, who do they think they are?
Not true - 2 pts
I feel that the test asked the right questions, but that it didn't give enough wiggle room. I'm at a point in my life where a lot of things are changing for me, so some of the answers I agreed with while the other half I didn't. I believe that once I've become more outgoing and organized then I'll be able to manage a job as a reporter or journalist.
Tuesday, August 28, 2007
3 Leads
Lead #1: Time -- yesterday. Where -- Butte County Court. Who -- a local couple was in a traffic accident in March. They sued. Yesterday, the two were awarded $150,000 in damages. They had suffered injuries. That's what the damages were for.
(Edited: A local couple received $150,000 in damages yesterday because of a car accident in which they were injured in March).
Lead #2: What -- a snowstorm. So what? Well, another is expected. Forecasters say it will hit the Sierras today. It's part of a series of snowstorms.
Forty-one families were removed from a housing facility located on 204 Union Ave. as a fire destroyed the building today. Three firefighters were injured during the evacuation according to the police.
(Edited: Three firefighters were injured today while rescuing 41 families from a burning building located on 204 Union Ave according to the police.)
First blog
My name is Kaajal, and I'm hoping to become a journalist with a magazine concentration.
I'd like to learn more about how to write news and the type of reporting that would involve. I love learning about mass media in general. It fascinates me greatly to see how much the media affect people.
I'd like to learn more about how to write news and the type of reporting that would involve. I love learning about mass media in general. It fascinates me greatly to see how much the media affect people.
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